#10: busy, didn't write
#11: rest
#12: From an exercise in The Practice of Poetry (p.51)
“Experience falls through language like water through a sieve.”
"Poems begin where ordinary conversations leave off. If we can say something clearly, we don't need to write a poem about that experience or feeling or idea. Such a poem would be superfluous. Instead, we write poems about what we can not articulate, but feel pressured to say, which is why poems use language in unusual ways. In ordinary conversation we rarely use fresh metaphors. We don’t say, as William Carlos Williams does in one poem,"nature in its barrennes/equals the stupidity of man" (These) or as Rita Dove writes in another, “Everyday a wilderness" (Dusting). But a poem will often begin with a metaphor the poet has to learn how to understand. And often, metaphor and simile may be a poets only means for capturing experience in all its rich complexity."
The things we leave undone are different (or)
how bitterness leads to unfinished poems
A book that has been
sitting on a shelf, dust
accumulating in its spine, unread
The corner of the yard,
thicket has spread over our fence
for years. I could weed it out,
plant a lemon tree.
Fifteen minutes of overtime
everyday - never leaves early enough
to tickle the toes trapped in a onesy pajama
or to make a long-distance call
on the drive home.
To work on: metaphor and simile, create them
The time between us not talking is like the cardboard between my wooden desk leg and the uneven floor. Pushed on, balancing, pretending to be steady, not true to the desk, telling of the floor.